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Valuta's story.

Post  valuta on Mon Feb 14, 2011 12:03 pm

This story Will be updated whenever I feel like it, I will add new chapters or improvements by editing this post, instead of adding new posts, that way you can comment here.
Your comments, can be used in the story, as change, edit or as a new character.
(currently there is one character that is "not" controlled by me (packman).



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Chapter 1, Where the hell am I?

*Wakes up and finds herself in a damp, cramped room with hardly any memories*
Wha...?
Where is this?
*Looks around bus sees nothing in the complete dark.*
*Gets up and hits head.*
Ow... That hurt!
*Feels around.*
*Seems to be laying on a bed of leaves under a very low ceiling.*
This way I can't stand up...
*lays back down.*
And what is with this bracelet...?
Well there's nothing much i can do, is there...
*Falls back asleep.*

---About five hours later---

???: Wake up!

Mhmm...

???: WAKE UP!!

*Wakes up.*
What's wrong...?

???: Someone came here for you it seems, but I don't know if you can trust him.
*Holds up a drawing.*

*Looks closely.*
No, I don't recognize him...
Wait...
What am I doing here?
No wait...
Where am I?
No wait...
How did i get here?
And...
Who are you?

???: Easy, easy!!
I'm Numas.
I don't know how you got here.
You're in Noisten. And since you're "most probably" not from here. On the planet Terra Canna.

Numas: As for what you are doing here...
You appeared in the forest, and we brought you here.

Who am I...?

Numas: I don't know either.
Have a drink, it'll calm you down.

*Drinks the entire cup in one go.*
Is it me or is it hot in here...
*Passes out.*


Chapter 2, Waking up in a treehouse.

*Wakes up in a treehouse, tied to a wall.*
Ugh... My head...
*Gets handed a glass of (what seems to be) water.*
*Takes a sip.*
Thanks...
Wait a sec!

Elf: What is it?

Where am I and how did I get here?

Elf: You're in one of the elf villages, and we rescued you from the gnomes, they ere smuggling you to their "holy grounds". They were most probably going to use you as a sacrifice.

Sacrifice!? Then why did you rescue me, aren't you gnomes too?

Elf: WHAT!!!
*The elf turns away and rushes out of the room*

Hey! Wait up!

*Door slams shut.*

Dammit...

---Three hours later---

*The door opens.*

Finally!
Why did you leave?

*An older elf follows the one that took care of me.*

What's going on...?

The older elf: How dare someone like you insult our people, comparing us to those "idiots" that crawl over the floors!
*He mutters something and leafs.*

---Silence---

*The elf that took care of me unties me*
My name is Catella, please follow me to my da- *cough* the king's palace.

*Spacing out, surprised by the reaction of the older gnome.*

Catella: (btw, this is chanting) Maxima gratia dea movere et...

Isn't that latin!?

Catella: *Puzzled* What!? What do you mean?
Can you understand the holy language?
Please follow me to the king, he has to know this!

*I follow her to the king, where she explains how and where they found me, and tells him I could "understand" the language of the ancients.*

The king: So you were in the hands of those ground crawlers...
Were you aware of what they were going to do to you?

No.

*Catella prods me and murmurs:* Be more polite, will you!

My apologies sir, I did not, and still do not know what the were going to do.

The king: According to what we know about the ground crawlers they sacrifice a variety of things to their gods, which we, except for prayers and chants, don't.
Since your species don't "naturally occur" here they, most probably, would have sacrificed you if it wasn't for my daughter to rescue you.

I am indeed very thankful, for both rescuing me and your hospitality.

The king: My daughter has also informed me of you ability to understand the words of our ancients, and your lack of knowledge about our customs.
I will, first of all, teach you the basics of our customs, Catella will inform you about the others.

---One, Do never, ever, compare us to the ground crawlers, we are elves, they but mere animals that can talk, gnomes. Can't you see the obvious difference (elves look like humans, except for their ears)

---Two, We are very proud to be gifted prosperity by the gods, and will therefore not betray them. To prove our faith we have prayers and chants. Though these are not compulsory to preform, I would like you to study them every once in a while, but I'll be coming back to that later.

---Tree, There are classes in our society: First comes the ruling king and his family. Second come the high priests and magicians. Third come the wealthy civilians and guest of the royal family, unless they are appointed a different class. Fourth come the normal civilians. And last come the enslaved ground crawlers. You currently are in the third class, but if you knowledge of the ancient language proves useful you will become a second class!

---Four, Be polite to people in a superior class, unless explicitly told otherwise!

Of course we have laws, but they all work according to the same line: You shall not steal. For example: "You shall not take one others life", if you would do so you'd rob them from their lives.
Understood?

Yes, sir.

The king: Good, and though I want you to be polite to me, I do want you to know my name, so hereby: My name is Arculmo.
May I know your name miss,

Well, my deepest apologies, but I have lost my memories of times before I came to this planet. Therefore I cannot remember my name, you could say I do not have one, currently...

King Arculmo: That indeed might be a problem. Catella, I will leave you in charge of naming our guest.
Tonight we will hold a feast!


Chapter 3, A new name, A new home.
---Later outside of the palace---
Catella: I will show you a place where you can stay, for the time being.
How about choosing a name for you while we're going there?

Sure... Everybody needs a name, don't they?

Catella: How about Rosa?

No, I don't think it suits me...

Catella: Ohh is that so...?

Miss princess, you really don't have to do this for me!

Catella: No need to be so formal, and I like to chose a name for you, so don't worry.

--- Five minutes later ---

How about... Amy?

Sounds good to me!

Catella: Your not kidding right, because we will all know you by that name.

I'm serious, I really do like it.

Catella: Then that's settled!

--- Another 10 minutes later ---

I present to you the emara estate!
*Points to a huge treehouse.*

Wow... It's huge, don't tell me you live there with only your family.

Catella: Of course not, stupid, it's my private mansion.
Well, you'll be living there with me until you've got your own place to stay.

You have got to be kidding me.
Well you can tell right away your wealthy!

Catella: Want to see the inside?

Do I have that much choice, since I'll be staying here after all?

Catella: Well... No, you don't!

*Follows her into the mansion.*
*Looks around...*
Wow...
It's even more amazing than what I expected! I don't know how to describe it but it looks kind of familiar to me.

Catella: I'm happy it does, now I don't have to worry about you getting lost.

I beg you pardon!

Catella: *innocently* Nothing, really!

But... Never mind...
What will my room be?

Catella: The third room in the left hallway.
That is actually the only part of the building we use, of course except for the kitchen and the living room.

Then what do you have all those other rooms for?

Catella: Half of the is storage, mostly libraries with ancient texts.
The others are either unused smaller rooms, they only have a bedroom and a toilet, or normal rooms, bedroom, bathroom and a "living room".
Our rooms are, of course, the larger ones.
Bedroom, bathroom, living room and even a small kitchen.
Well, follow me, I'll show you around!

*Follows Catella (what else can I do?).*

Catella: In the main hallway we have:
My room.
The housemaid's room.
Your room.
Empty, for occasional guests.
In the hallway above six rooms have been unified and that makes the library.
Same goes for the other side of that hallway, but only one of those rooms is a library, the others are just plain storage.
On the other side of the hallway we're currently in are the guest rooms, we don't use them unless we have a lot of visitors.

Ama---zing!

Catella: Well I grew up in this luxury, it's not that special for me.
How about you?

*Looks down*

Catella: My apologies, I forgot-

It's ok. You don't have to apologise to me for something like this

Catella: Shall I pour you a cup of tea to make up to you?

Never saying no to a cup of tea!

Chapter 3, to be continued



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Post  Donuteer on Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:27 am

Is the story fantasy with spaceships? (There IS a fantasy story with spaceships)

Anyway, if it is future fantasy, maybe I could teleport on the planet with my trusty Enterfries' teleporter.

If it is normal fantasy, I could... uhh... ...hmm... IDEA! I come from the future, and teleport on the planet.

BETTER IDEA! The Enterfries is being chased, I command it to go into a special gas somewhere in space, not knowing of the things that are going to happen...

Yeah you know what would happen.
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Post  valuta on Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:06 am

Thanks for the reply, I'll get you a character within the next two chapters (though you might have to change you name to something more normal in the story)
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Post  Donuteer on Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:58 am

Thanks, how about Don? Or if I become evil, Raetunod. (Not really different from Donuteer, but it sounds evil: Raetunod)

Actually, how about Don Raetuno'
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Post  valuta on Tue Feb 15, 2011 12:05 pm

Don, will do , but the surname is quite... Well... Strange, maybe something more normal XD
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Post  packman200 on Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:55 pm

well, if i join in the main story (going to the elves after "being double crossed by the gnome" (i use qoutations because i dont know elves stole you away before i got to find you Razz) make me join wierdly. lol
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Post  valuta on Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:31 am

I like your idea and I am planning to use that.
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Post  xeonwraith on Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:49 am

Yet another story? Keep me out this time.
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Post  valuta on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:01 pm

No can do,

Well sure, if you don't want to, your stuck in a time rift somewhere anyhow
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Post  packman200 on Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:12 am

yeah, if your time-warp/timerift feels like it (i bet we can prove they are alive...) it will just dump you out into the story. so pwnt.
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Post  valuta on Thu Feb 17, 2011 6:48 am

Bad news, im not feeling well lately... might be on less, and most probably no story updates.
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Post  Donuteer on Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:34 am

Dang, that's too bad. Ohwell, it happens to most of us.

(Changing back to capital)
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Post  valuta on Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:38 pm

I will do my best
*Bleeding from eyes*
*cough*
hafta keep goin'
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Post  packman200 on Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:14 pm

o_O... maybe you should get that checked...
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Post  Donuteer on Wed Feb 23, 2011 2:52 am

I think there was a desease(s) that made your eyes bleed...
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Post  valuta on Wed Feb 23, 2011 4:33 am

just kidding, im feeling some better alreaddy, but minecraft sevrer and homework making is eating my time O_O
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